RE: [gnso-pednr-dt] Updated Recommendations list

[Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks for this Michael.  A few comments.

Rec. 6 - Renewal Price Disclosure:  I think that this change captures 
the intent (and I do note that the legal opinion we just got did 
object to the old wording). If I read it correctly, it says that 
whatever rules are in force at Expiration time remain in force until 
it is renewed (by someone!) or deleted. It does not forbid the 
current practice of some registrars to have one price for days 1-n, 
and a different (higher) price starting at day n+1. Correct?
Rec. 7: - Educational Materials:  "provision a referral" is not 
clear. I suggest we use the comparable wording from the new RAA 
section 3.15 which reads "In the event that ICANN gives reasonable 
notice to Registrar that ICANN has published a webpage that 
identifies available registrant rights and responsibilities, and the 
content of such webpage is developed in consultation with registrars, 
Registrar shall provide a link to the webpage on any website it may 
operate for domain name registration or renewal clearly displayed to 
its Registered Name Holders at least as clearly as its links to 
policies or notifications required to be displayed under ICANN 
Consensus Policies."
Rec. 10 - Notice details: The change makes it an either/or which was 
not intended. I think that the term "full destination details" does 
cover the intent (ie, if the Registrar uses the (for instance) Whois 
Technical Contact for notices, say that. I would suggest that we use 
the original wording for now, and try to refine it in the final report.
Rec. 15 - The 8-day rule: No problem with the change about restarting 
the domain on renewal. The incorporation of the Rec 17 has a problem. 
I don't mind if it is put in here, although I think that it confuses 
the recommendation a bit. However, the problem is that the original 
Rec 17 applied to any redirection and not just during the 8 days.
I see that we have a problem in that there are two Rec 15.  Call the 
2nd one 15-2 for now.
Rec 15-2 - Whois: The WG was well aware that the current protocols 
did not support this change. The intent was to exercise the E in EPP 
(Extensible). The possible complexity, effort and time required to do 
this is what caused us to defer.
Alan



At 07/02/2011 12:16 PM, Michael Young wrote:
> Please see edits and changes,
>
> I've wrapped the elements of recommendation 17 into 15.  I've adjusted some
> language for clarity here and there.  I also made a modification to the
> Whois output recommendation that reflects an operational limitation to EPP
> implementations.
>
>
> Michael Young
>
> M:+1-647-289-1220
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Alan Greenberg [mailto:alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx]
> Sent: February-04-11 7:39 PM
> To: Michael Young
> Cc: PEDNR
> Subject: Re: [gnso-pednr-dt] Updated Recommendations list
>
> Look forward to seeing them.  I don't think there was anything added that
> has not been extensively discussed before, although not all had reached full
> consensus of those on the particular calls.
>
> Alan
>
> At 04/02/2011 07:09 PM, Michael Young wrote:
> >I have to say are some additions here I am surprised by, I will provide
> >suggested edits and at least one unexpected recommendation I believe
> >needs to be dropped.
> >
> >Thanks
> >
> >Michael Young
> >Afilias
> >D:416-673-4109
> >M:647-289-1220
> >
> >On 2011-02-04, at 13:38, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> >
> > > The attached document includes the update that Marika made based
> > on our 02 Feb 2011 teleconference, a few changes/additions that I
> > made, and what I think are the last three Recommendations from the
> > proposals that we have been discussing.
> > >
> > > I will do another review of the last teleconference and the
> > proposal list by sometime tomorrow to see if there is anything else
> > that is outstanding.
> > >
> > > Please review and send comments to the list.
> > >
> > > Alan
> > > <PEDNR Recommendations - updated 4 February 2011.doc>
>
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