Re: [gnso-policyimpl-dt] For final review - proposed WG Charter

["Mike O'Connor" <mike@xxxxxxxxxx>]

this is very excellent nitpicking!  i like it too.

mikey


On Jul 1, 2013, at 6:13 PM, "Shatan, Gregory S." <GShatan@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

> I must maintain my nitpicker-of-the-day status conveyed upon me by Mikey 
> O’Connor…. J
>  
> Greg
>  
> From: Gomes, Chuck [mailto:cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx] 
> Sent: Monday, July 01, 2013 7:09 PM
> To: Shatan, Gregory S.; 'Tim Ruiz'; Eduardo Diaz
> Cc: Marika Konings; gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx
> Subject: RE: [gnso-policyimpl-dt] For final review - proposed WG Charter
>  
> I like that better Greg.  I almost suggested the change to ‘with’ but decided 
> I could live with ‘to’.
>  
> Chuck
>  
> From: owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx 
> [mailto:owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Shatan, Gregory S.
> Sent: Monday, July 01, 2013 7:04 PM
> To: 'Tim Ruiz'; Eduardo Diaz
> Cc: Marika Konings; gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx
> Subject: RE: [gnso-policyimpl-dt] For final review - proposed WG Charter
>  
> I would suggest a couple of minor changes to Eduardo’s change, as follows: "A 
> framework for implementation-related discussions associated withGNSO Policy 
> Recommendations;"
>  
> Greg
>  
> From: owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx 
> [mailto:owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Tim Ruiz
> Sent: Monday, July 01, 2013 6:49 PM
> To: Eduardo Diaz
> Cc: Marika Konings; gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx
> Subject: Re: [gnso-policyimpl-dt] For final review - proposed WG Charter
>  
> I'm ok with this change.
> 
> On Jul 1, 2013, at 5:43 PM, "Eduardo Diaz" <eduardodiazrivera@xxxxxxxxx> 
> wrote:
> 
> The wording used in #3 under the Mission & Scope - "A framework for 
> implementation related discussions related to GNSO Policy Recommendations" -  
> is cacophonous. May I suggest to use the following: "A framework for 
> implementation related discussions associated to GNSO Policy Recommendations;"
>  
> -ed
>  
>  
> 
> On Mon, Jul 1, 2013 at 4:32 PM, Marika Konings <marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx> 
> wrote:
> Dear All,
>  
> Please find attached for final review the latest version of the WG Charter 
> which includes the edits discussed today. To facilitate your review, you'll 
> find attached a clean as well as a redline version. 
>  
> Please share any comments / edits you may have with the mailing list at the 
> latest by 23.59 UTC on Tuesday 2 July. 
>  
> Based on the feedback received at that point, we'll decide whether or not to 
> go ahead with the meeting on Wednesday 3 July at 19.00 UTC.
>  
> The proposed motion will follow tomorrow.
>  
> Best regards,
>  
> Marika
> 
> 
>  
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