Re: REMINDER: Re: [gnso-policyimpl-wg] Input requested - Policy & Implementation Working Definitions
Hi,Apologies for the lateness, it is obvious to me I am trying to do too many things and need to drop a few more activities. In any case, I have read through it and indicated a few of the places where I take issue with these definitions. avri On 27-Jan-14 15:29, Marika Konings wrote: Reminder: please send your comments / edits, _preferably in the form of proposed edits or wording_, to the mailing list *at the latest by Wednesday 29 January.* * * Thanks, * * Marika *From:*owner-gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx <mailto:owner-gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx> [mailto:owner-gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx] *On Behalf Of *Michael Graham *Sent:* Wednesday, January 22, 2014 5:06 PM *To:* Marika Konings; gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx <mailto:gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx> *Subject:* Re: [gnso-policyimpl-wg] Input requested - Policy & Implementation Working Definitions PIWG Team: I would like to echo Marika’s request — it would be tremendously more helpful if you could provide proposed edits or language, rather than comments alone. Please do include comments, however, to explain the rationale of your changes — even if only to note “Syntax agreement”, “correct capitalization" etc., and especially to illuminate your proposals. Finally, at the risk of repeating myself and the introduction to the definitions, I want to repeat that the definition sub-team’s goal is to arrive at definitions for specific terms which enables the Work Group to discuss the matters before it without debating the meaning or significance of those terms. By doing so, we hope the Working Group’s deliberations will be able to focus on fulfilling the Charter requests and produce the deliverables requested, among which we anticipate will be further elucidations of and discussions concerning these terms and their significance to Policy and Implementation. Michael R. Graham *From: *Marika Konings <marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx <mailto:marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx>> *Date: *Wednesday, January 22, 2014 at 3:38 PM *To: *"gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx <mailto:gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx>" <gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx <mailto:gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx>> *Subject: *[gnso-policyimpl-wg] Input requested - Policy & Implementation Working Definitions Dear All, Following today's meeting, you are all strongly encouraged to send any comments or suggestions that you expect the sub-team to consider as it reviews the latest version of the working definitions document (see attached), _preferably in the form of proposed edits or wording_, to the mailing list *at the latest by Wednesday 29 January*. Following that the sub-team will take your comments and edits and review these with the aim to provide the WG with an updated version in time for its next meeting. Thanks, Marika Attachment:
Draft definitions - FINAL - 16 January 2013 with Gomes input +ad.doc
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