Re: [gnso-policyimpl-wg] Updated Public Comment Review Tool and a note for next week

[Amr Elsadr <aelsadr@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Hi, and thanks for the updated document Mary.

I just wanted to reiterate my view on the RySG input on row 4.9 of the review 
tool table.

I believe the change in text suggested by the RySG to be quite a good one. 
Seems to me that it does a better job of clarifying the intent of the 
principle. The idea here was not to give staff the ability to make transparent 
changes to a proposed implementation (provided that they do not affect the 
intent of the policy recommendation), but rather to require that those changes 
meet both criteria; not changing the intent of policy recommendations in 
addition to being transparently made. The change in language suggested by the 
RySG, to me, is constructive towards that end.

I bring this up, because although the WG response appears to be “noted”, there 
is no recommended action to make the suggested change. We did not agree to 
making this change on our last call, but I think it is something worth 
considering.

Thanks.

Amr

On Mar 27, 2015, at 12:06 AM, Mary Wong <mary.wong@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

> Dear WG members,
> 
> Please find attached an updated version of the Public Comment Review Tool, 
> reflecting WG comments from the WG call yesterday. For the information of 
> those who were not able to join the call, we covered more comments related to 
> Section 4 of the Initial Report, on the Policy & Implementation Principles, 
> up to comment #4.14 (with edits and WG notes shown in blue).
> 
> For the next call, please be sure to review the remaining comments starting 
> from #4.15 so that we can continue to make timely progress with our review of 
> all the comments we received on our Initial Report. For your convenience, the 
> survey which commentators filled out and on which the Tool was based can be 
> found here: 
> http://gnso.icann.org/en/issues/policy-implementation/pi-wg-initial-report-survey-19jan15-en.pdf,
>  and our full Initial Report here: 
> http://gnso.icann.org/en/issues/policy-implementation/pi-wg-initial-recommendations-19jan15-en.pdf.
> 
> Thanks and cheers
> Mary
> 
> Mary Wong
> Senior Policy Director
> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
> Telephone: +1 603 574 4892
> Email: mary.wong@xxxxxxxxx
> 
> 
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