Re: [gnso-policyimpl-wg] Updated Public Comment Review Tool and a note for next week
Thanks, Amr if there is no objection, we will include the textual change suggested by the RySG in the appropriate column of row 4.9 as a WG recommendation for adoption. Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4892 Email: mary.wong@xxxxxxxxx From: Amr Elsadr <aelsadr@xxxxxxxxxxx> Date: Friday, March 27, 2015 at 07:56 To: Mary Wong <mary.wong@xxxxxxxxx> Cc: "gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx" <gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx> Subject: Re: [gnso-policyimpl-wg] Updated Public Comment Review Tool and a note for next week > Hi, and thanks for the updated document Mary. > > I just wanted to reiterate my view on the RySG input on row 4.9 of the review > tool table. > > I believe the change in text suggested by the RySG to be quite a good one. > Seems to me that it does a better job of clarifying the intent of the > principle. The idea here was not to give staff the ability to make transparent > changes to a proposed implementation (provided that they do not affect the > intent of the policy recommendation), but rather to require that those changes > meet both criteria; not changing the intent of policy recommendations in > addition to being transparently made. The change in language suggested by the > RySG, to me, is constructive towards that end. > > I bring this up, because although the WG response appears to be ³noted², there > is no recommended action to make the suggested change. We did not agree to > making this change on our last call, but I think it is something worth > considering. > > Thanks. > > Amr > > On Mar 27, 2015, at 12:06 AM, Mary Wong <mary.wong@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > >> Dear WG members, >> >> Please find attached an updated version of the Public Comment Review Tool, >> reflecting WG comments from the WG call yesterday. For the information of >> those who were not able to join the call, we covered more comments related to >> Section 4 of the Initial Report, on the Policy & Implementation Principles, >> up to comment #4.14 (with edits and WG notes shown in blue). >> >> For the next call, please be sure to review the remaining comments starting >> from #4.15 so that we can continue to make timely progress with our review of >> all the comments we received on our Initial Report. For your convenience, the >> survey which commentators filled out and on which the Tool was based can be >> found here: >> http://gnso.icann.org/en/issues/policy-implementation/pi-wg-initial-report-su >> rvey-19jan15-en.pdf, and our full Initial Report here: >> http://gnso.icann.org/en/issues/policy-implementation/pi-wg-initial-recommend >> ations-19jan15-en.pdf. >> >> Thanks and cheers >> Mary >> >> Mary Wong >> Senior Policy Director >> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) >> Telephone: +1 603 574 4892 >> Email: mary.wong@xxxxxxxxx >> >> >> <Public comment revi#332AAF0.doc> > Attachment:
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