AW: [gnso-ppsc-pdp] For review - updated version of Initial Report
Having crossread section 1 I've inserted comments as attached
Regards
Wolf-Ulrich
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Von: owner-gnso-ppsc-pdp@xxxxxxxxx
[mailto:owner-gnso-ppsc-pdp@xxxxxxxxx] Im Auftrag von Marika Konings
Gesendet: Mittwoch, 26. Mai 2010 17:18
An: Gnso-ppsc-pdp@xxxxxxxxx
Betreff: [gnso-ppsc-pdp] For review - updated version of Initial
Report
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Dear All,
Please find posted on the wiki (
https://st.icann.org/icann-ppsc/index.cgi?pdp_team) and updated version
of the PDP-WT Initial Report. This version includes:
* Proposed language for each of the recommendations (see
section 1) as discussed at our last meeting
* Updated introduction, flow chart and new charts for
stages III and IV (see section 9)
Please note that these edits have not yet been reviewed by any
one else but me, but due to the limited time available, Jeff agreed to
get this send out as soon as possible to allow you hopefully enough time
to review these sections in time for the meeting tomorrow.
Do note that some further updates to the report are required
once the recommendations in section 1 are agreed upon as these will need
to be incorporated in the relevant sections in the body of the report as
well as the flow chart.
In order to meet the publication deadline, I would like to
strongly encourage you to review sections 1 and 9 and share your edits /
comments with the mailing list ahead of tomorrow's call. Based on the
feedback received, I hope to 'finalize' the report later on Thursday or
Friday so that it can be put out for final review to the WT with a
deadline for edits of Sunday 30 May so that the report can be posted on
Monday 31 May.
Thanks,
Marika
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PDP-WT - Draft Initial Report - Updated 26 May 2010 (WUK edits).doc
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