[gnso-ppsc-pdp] RE: Updated version of proposed Final Report
All, Please find my proposed revisions, comments and suggestions to Section 2 of the Report. As with the changes to the Executive Summary, these are being proposed in my personal capacity and NOT as the Chair of the PDP-WT or a Registry representative. Jeffrey J. Neuman Neustar, Inc. / Vice President, Law & Policy ________________________________ The information contained in this e-mail message is intended only for the use of the recipient(s) named above and may contain confidential and/or privileged information. If you are not the intended recipient you have received this e-mail message in error and any review, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this message is strictly prohibited. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately and delete the original message. From: owner-gnso-ppsc-pdp@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-ppsc-pdp@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Neuman, Jeff Sent: Wednesday, February 16, 2011 8:35 PM To: Marika Konings; Gnso-ppsc-pdp@xxxxxxxxx Subject: [gnso-ppsc-pdp] RE: Updated version of proposed Final Report All, Sorry for doing this piece-meal, but I did some editing of the Executive Summary and am providing it to everyone at the same time. I do not believe I changed any of the substance, but tried to provide a little more context. As this will be the first thing that is read (and may be the only one sad to say), I wanted to make sure that certain aspects stood out. No pride of authorship here, so if you don't like or agree with the revisions, just let me know. Thanks. Jeffrey J. Neuman Neustar, Inc. / Vice President, Law & Policy ________________________________ The information contained in this e-mail message is intended only for the use of the recipient(s) named above and may contain confidential and/or privileged information. If you are not the intended recipient you have received this e-mail message in error and any review, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this message is strictly prohibited. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately and delete the original message. From: owner-gnso-ppsc-pdp@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-ppsc-pdp@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Marika Konings Sent: Wednesday, February 16, 2011 11:52 AM To: Gnso-ppsc-pdp@xxxxxxxxx Subject: [gnso-ppsc-pdp] Updated version of proposed Final Report Dear All, Please find attached an updated version of the proposed PDP-WT Final Report which includes the changes / edits discussed during Monday's meeting as well as the high-level overview graphic. As a reminder, any substantial issues on the proposed Final Report will need to be submitted before Thursday's meeting of the PDP WT (14.30 UTC). Any non-substantial issues (typos, etc.) should be submitted at the latest by close of business on Friday 18 February. Best regards, Marika Attachment:
Comments on the Recommendations.docx
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