Re: [gnso-ppsc] Slides for review

[Avri Doria <avri@xxxxxxx>]

On 30 Nov 2010, at 11:15, Neuman, Jeff wrote:

> 
> Marika,
> 
> How hard would it be to eliminate the "one world" slogan from all slides and 
> to remove the Cartagena and ICANN symbols from all slides but the first one?

should be relatively trivial to edit the template.


> 
> Avri - In terms of substance, do you have any modifications.
> 

oh, you wanted those as well.

- General comment - should include into on where to find the report

- General comment might be good to include a slide with a timeline of what this 
group has done including starting date, comment periods, further drafts, edit 
process with ppsc ....

7.  Even though the section is called election of leaders, the whole content 
talks about selection of leaders and it may be more accurate to say selection 
of leaders

Slides 7, 11 might be good to have a slide that explicitly states what the open 
issues with the PPSC are 

a.