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[gnso-thickwhois-dt] Consensus-candidate charter draft

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  • Subject: [gnso-thickwhois-dt] Consensus-candidate charter draft
  • From: "Mike O'Connor" <mike@xxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Fri, 28 Sep 2012 10:06:16 -0500

hi all,

i'm attaching a new draft for you to review.  it would be absolutely terrific 
if we could beat this draft up on the list and arrive at consensus on our next 
(and hopefully final) call next Thursday.

i'm shipping it without the redlining because the redline history is getting 
pretty busy.  but it's all there if you'd like to review the changes in detail.

here's what's changing;

- i drove that last draft version of the "transition to authoritative" language 

- i added a footnote to clarify what we mean by "domains they sponsor"

- i've wandered through the draft and tried to get the capitalization right on 
the words registrar and registry 

- i've summarily deleted a couple of Jeff's suggestions -- Jeff, there wasn't 
much appetite for them on the last call, so this is your chance to 
advocate/persuade if you feel really strongly (although i'll note that this is 
really your second chance since you had the opportunity to post to the list 
last week as well)

- i've restructured a few sentences to swing them into the active voice and 
made a few other (hopefully) cosmetic changes to the language.

let's try to really kick this draft hard so we can polish this off on the next 
call -- otherwise Marika tells me we'll miss the deadline for the Toronto 
agenda and i'll have to work off my schedule failure as the lowest-ranked 
roadie in her rock band.  ;-)



Attachment: Thick Whois Draft Charter - Updated 28 September 2012 - Mikey.doc
Description: MS-Word document

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