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RE: [gnso-thickwhois-dt] Consensus-candidate charter draft
- To: "Mike O'Connor" <mike@xxxxxxxxxx>, "Gnso-thickwhois-dt@xxxxxxxxx DT" <Gnso-thickwhois-dt@xxxxxxxxx>
- Subject: RE: [gnso-thickwhois-dt] Consensus-candidate charter draft
- From: Jonathan Zuck <jzuck@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Wed, 3 Oct 2012 21:08:36 +0000
Nope. That makes sense
-----Original Message-----
From: owner-gnso-thickwhois-dt@xxxxxxxxx
[mailto:owner-gnso-thickwhois-dt@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Mike O'Connor
Sent: Wednesday, October 03, 2012 11:48 AM
To: Gnso-thickwhois-dt@xxxxxxxxx DT
Subject: Re: [gnso-thickwhois-dt] Consensus-candidate charter draft
hi Ray,
thanks for breaking the ice. :-)
i agree with your idea -- good catch. does this cause any heartburn for
others?
mikey
On Oct 3, 2012, at 9:35 AM, Ray Fassett <ray@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Mikey, while it seems all quiet on the western front, I thought I
> would go ahead and break the ice with this thought for you. Under
> Mission and Scope, it says the following:
>
> "The PDP Working Group is tasked to provide the GNSO Council with a
> policy recommendation regarding the use of 'thick' Whois by all gTLD
> Registries, both existing and future."
>
> Under Objective and Goals it says:
>
> "To develop, at a minimum, an Initial Report and a Final Report
> addressing whether there should be a requirement for 'thick' Whois for
> all gTLD Registries to be delivered to the GNSO Council, following the
> processes described in Annex A of the ICANN Bylaws and the GNSO PDP Manual."
>
> Should the Objective and Goals language be altered to be optically
> consistent with the Mission and Scope? For example:
>
> To develop, at a minimum, an Initial Report and a Final Report
> regarding the use of 'thick' Whois by all gTLD Registries, both
> existing and future to be delivered to the GNSO Council, following the
> processes described in Annex A of the ICANN Bylaws and the GNSO PDP Manual.
>
> Personally, I do not see much distinction between "Mission & Purpose"
> and "Objective & Goals". If others feel same, my thinking is that the
> two should read reasonably consistent (one way or another) for less
> opportunity to potentially varied differences of interpretation later.
>
> Ray
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-gnso-thickwhois-dt@xxxxxxxxx
> [mailto:owner-gnso-thickwhois-dt@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Mike O'Connor
> Sent: Friday, September 28, 2012 11:06 AM
> To: Gnso-thickwhois-dt@xxxxxxxxx DT
> Subject: [gnso-thickwhois-dt] Consensus-candidate charter draft
>
> hi all,
>
> i'm attaching a new draft for you to review. it would be absolutely
> terrific if we could beat this draft up on the list and arrive at
> consensus on our next (and hopefully final) call next Thursday.
>
> i'm shipping it without the redlining because the redline history is
> getting pretty busy. but it's all there if you'd like to review the
> changes in detail.
>
> here's what's changing;
>
> - i drove that last draft version of the "transition to authoritative"
> language in
>
> - i added a footnote to clarify what we mean by "domains they sponsor"
>
> - i've wandered through the draft and tried to get the capitalization
> right on the words registrar and registry
>
> - i've summarily deleted a couple of Jeff's suggestions -- Jeff, there
> wasn't much appetite for them on the last call, so this is your chance
> to advocate/persuade if you feel really strongly (although i'll note
> that this is really your second chance since you had the opportunity
> to post to the list last week as well)
>
> - i've restructured a few sentences to swing them into the active
> voice and made a few other (hopefully) cosmetic changes to the language.
>
> let's try to really kick this draft hard so we can polish this off on
> the next call -- otherwise Marika tells me we'll miss the deadline for
> the Toronto agenda and i'll have to work off my schedule failure as
> the lowest-ranked roadie in her rock band. ;-)
>
> thanks,
>
> mikey
>
>
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