Re: [gnso-vi-feb10] Salop and Wright - Edits to Section 2.2

[Richard Tindal <richardtindal@xxxxxx>]

I'm OK with this version.  

RT


On Jul 19, 2010, at 2:41 PM, Neuman, Jeff wrote:

> All,
>  
> Based on today’s discussion and the agreement to remove Section 4 of the 
> Initial report, I have drafted some language that we can include in Section 
> 2.2 to discuss Salop and Wright.  On the call we discussed not having the 
> report as an Annex, but rather just linking to it.
>  
> I would like for everyone to review to make sure that they are comfortable 
> with what I have drafted.  I believe it is objective and takes out all of the 
> advocacy.  That said, I wrote it so of course I feel this way.
> 
> I am particularly interested in feedback from Avri, as I believe this is the 
> reason for her protest and wanting a Minority Report.
>  
> P.S., I took the text from the Wiki, put it in Word and therefore was not 
> able to get the footnotes right. 
>  
> Let me know your thoughts.
>  
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