Re: [gnso-vi-feb10] DIR-Final "Free Trade Proposal"

[Richard Tindal <richardtindal@xxxxxx>]

Hi Berry,

I though we had agreement that the section 6 summaries would be free of 
advocacy language.  The opening paragraph of yours appears to be rich with it

I havent looked at the others recently but I know Jeff Neuman and Volker 
amended theirs to make them purely factual statements of their proposal's 
features.

Seems like FT should be the same

Richard



On Jul 20, 2010, at 4:54 PM, Berry Cobb wrote:

> Mikey,
> 
> Attached is the Free Trade Proposal for Section 6.  Please advise if you
> need additional clarification or questions.  Thank you.  B
> 
> 
> Berry Cobb
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-gnso-vi-feb10@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-vi-feb10@xxxxxxxxx]
> On Behalf Of Mike O'Connor
> Sent: Tuesday, July 20, 2010 10:36 AM
> To: Gnso-vi-feb10@xxxxxxxxx
> Subject: [gnso-vi-feb10] Note to drafting-people -- please send me a drop-in
> replacement for your sections by 2400 GMT
> Importance: High
> 
> 
> hi all (but especially you people on the hook for drafting),
> 
> please send me a "drop in replacement" of your deliverables by 2400 GMT
> today -- my chances of accurately summarizing the email threads is nil.  :-)
> 
> so if you're doing a section, give me the drop in replacement for the whole
> section (or Proposal, or Principal), rather than changes.
> 
> if you could do me one more favor...  send it to me with "DIR-Final" in the
> subject line, that will help me identify the version you really want me to
> staple into the report draft.  
> 
> a last favor.  if you've already sent it, please resend it with that
> DIR-Final added to the subject line.  i'd hate to get down to the wire and
> discover that i've dropped in the wrong draft.
> 
> thanks!
> 
> mikey
> 
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