[gnso-vi-feb10] New Revised SRSU Text
All,
I've attached a clean copy of further revised SRSU text that I think
(and hope) addresses the concerns raised and reflects input by several
WG members that had been deleted in the current IR text. [Richard, I
summarized your BRU1 text b/c everyone else had 1 sentence and BRU1 was
two paragraphs.] I *do not* copy it below because doing so drops the
footnotes.
I have also attached two comparisons. One is a comparison of the "new"
clean text against the text that's currently in the Initial Report (the
"current IR SRSU redline"). The other comparison is of the new "clean"
text against what was submitted on Wednesday afternoon ("07212010 IR
SRSU redline").
Please let me know if you have questions.
K
<<07212010 IR SRSU redline.DOC>> <<Current IR SRSU redline.DOC>> <<KR
changes to IR SRSU text.DOC>>
Attachment:
07212010 IR SRSU redline.DOC Attachment:
Current IR SRSU redline.DOC Attachment:
KR changes to IR SRSU text.DOC
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