RE: [gtld-council] GNSO PDP Dec 05: new TLDsUpdated Recommendations Summary

["Ray Fassett" <rfassett@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

In 2.4, my suggestion is to capitalize the "C" and the "P" as follows (note
that Consensus Policies is capitalized in 4.4):

2.4     Applicants must comply with all ICANN "C"onsensus "P"olicies when
they are developed.

In 2.8, my impression was that strong support existed for "operational" plan
in place of "business" plan as follows:

2.8     The applicant must provide a financial and operational plan that
provides an assurance that the applicant has the capability to meets its
business ambitions.

In 4.6, The C & P must be capitalized....same with 4.7

Ray








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Sent: Wednesday, October 18, 2006 6:43 AM
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Subject: [gtld-council] GNSO PDP Dec 05: new TLDsUpdated Recommendations
Summary

Colleagues

Please find attached an updated draft Recommendations Summary which  
includes feedback from a number of participants and from the results  
of the 5 October 2006 conference call.   Thank you very much to those  
who have helped with re-crafting and clarifying language.

Some of the responses I received fell into the category of  
implementation issues which are being discussed, in detail, in a  
series of internal staff calls.

I am happy to take further suggestions and improvements over the next  
few days whilst I complete the drafting of the Final Report.

Note that this is a working draft and has no official status until it  
is included in the draft Final Report.

Kind regards.


Liz
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Liz Williams
Senior Policy Counselor
ICANN - Brussels
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