RE: [gtld-council] PDP Dec 05: Follow-up to 23 June

["Edmon Chung" <edmon@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

May I suggest:

"An application will be rejected if is shown to be in violation of the laws of 
the jurisdiction in which the applicant is incorporated;

Furthermore, for gTLDs that appear to serve an economic sector or a community, 
an application will be rejected if it is determined that there is substantial 
opposition to it from among established institutions of the target economic 
sector or community."


- Avoiding the terms "national" and "country"
- Suggesting that "substantial opposition" is up front to make it more clear.

Edmon



> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gtld-
> council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of philip.sheppard@xxxxxx
> Sent: Monday, June 25, 2007 11:11 PM
> To: gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> Subject: [gtld-council] PDP Dec 05: Follow-up to 23 June
> 
> 
> Building on Mawaki's good suggestion with my original clarification
> Philip
> ________________
> 
> 
> "An application will be rejected if is shown to be in
> violation of the national law of the country in which the
> applicant is incorporated;
> 
> Furthermore, for gTLDs that appear to serve an economic sector
> or a community, an application will be rejected if it is
> determined that there is opposition to it from among established
> institutions of the target economic sector or community and that that
> opposition is substantial."