Re: [soac-mapo] Updated Letter
Thanks Konstantinos. Attached is the document reflecting changes from Konstantinos, Olivier and Robin. Plus I added the the term "Recommendation 6" to the IO section to reflect a comment that we be clear that we are talking about Recommendation 6 objections in that section. I thought that it would be useful to be working from one document. Thanks. Jon Attachment:
Rec6 CWG Draft Response Clean 010711-1.doc On Jan 7, 2011, at 7:36 AM, Konstantinos Komaitis wrote: > Jon and all, > > I have added a couple of sentences on the incitement and instigation issue > that I think should be included and reflect our discussion in yesterday's > call. I used Olivier's document, I think this is the last one with the edits. > > I hope this is ok and that there are no objections by the group. > > Thank you all for a very fruitful discussion. > > Best > > KK > > Dr. Konstantinos Komaitis, > > Law Lecturer, > Director of Postgraduate Instructional Courses > Director of LLM Information Technology and Telecommunications Law > University of Strathclyde, > The Law School, > Graham Hills building, > 50 George Street, Glasgow G1 1BA > UK > tel: +44 (0)141 548 4306 > http://www.routledgemedia.com/books/The-Current-State-of-Domain-Name-Regulation-isbn9780415477765 > Selected publications: > http://hq.ssrn.com/submissions/MyPapers.cfm?partid=501038 > Website: www.komaitis.org > > > > -----Original Message----- > From: owner-soac-mapo@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-soac-mapo@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf > Of Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond > Sent: Thursday, January 06, 2011 11:23 PM > To: Jon Nevett > Cc: soac-mapo > Subject: Re: [soac-mapo] Updated Letter > > Jon, > > first - thanks for this very fast turn-around. > I just have a handful of very minor editing changes - words missing in > sentences. Sorry, I'm picky. :-) Please check that this does not change the > meaning of the sentence. > Please find my redline based on your letter (ie. which does not include > Robin's amendments) Kind regards, > > Olivier > > -- > Olivier MJ Crépin-Leblond, PhD > http://www.gih.com/ocl.html > > <OCL EDIT Rec6 CWG Draft Response Clean 010611.doc>
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