Re: [soac-mapo] Updated Letter

[Jon Nevett <jon@xxxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks Konstantinos.  Attached is the document reflecting changes from 
Konstantinos, Olivier and Robin.  Plus I added the the term "Recommendation 6" 
to the IO section to reflect a comment that we be clear that we are talking 
about Recommendation 6 objections in that section.  I thought that it would be 
useful to be working from one document.

Thanks.

Jon

Attachment: Rec6 CWG Draft Response Clean 010711-1.doc
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On Jan 7, 2011, at 7:36 AM, Konstantinos Komaitis wrote:

> Jon and all,
> 
> I have added a couple of sentences on the incitement and instigation issue 
> that I think should be included and reflect our discussion in yesterday's 
> call. I used Olivier's document, I think this is the last one with the edits. 
> 
> I hope this is ok and that there are no objections by the group.
> 
> Thank you all for a very fruitful discussion.
> 
> Best
> 
> KK
> 
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> 
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> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-soac-mapo@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-soac-mapo@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf 
> Of Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond
> Sent: Thursday, January 06, 2011 11:23 PM
> To: Jon Nevett
> Cc: soac-mapo
> Subject: Re: [soac-mapo] Updated Letter
> 
> Jon,
> 
> first - thanks for this very fast turn-around.
> I just have a handful of very minor editing changes - words missing in 
> sentences. Sorry, I'm picky. :-) Please check that this does not change the 
> meaning of the sentence.
> Please find my redline based on your letter (ie. which does not include 
> Robin's amendments) Kind regards,
> 
> Olivier
> 
> --
> Olivier MJ Crépin-Leblond, PhD
> http://www.gih.com/ocl.html
> 
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