Re: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Review of draft report

[Robert Hoggarth <robert.hoggarth@xxxxxxxxx>]

Thank you Evan.  I had completed a new version of the draft encompassing and 
attempting to address Alan and Avri's comments.  I will review your input and 
make additional changes so that we can have a new master document starting with 
tomorrow's WG call.

I am still experiencing difficulty reading comments in the document. Although 
instances where you have added text is clear,  I connect read any comments in 
the right margin - even Alan's original ones. I am hopeful that I am the only 
one experiencing this format difficulty, but I am doubtful.  Perhaps a format 
guru on the WG has discovered a format work–around.

Perhaps you should stop at page 22 and then contribute additional comments and 
suggested edits after tomorrow's call.

Best,

RobH

From: Evan Leibovitch <evan@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:evan@xxxxxxxxx>>
Date: Mon, 22 Aug 2011 01:46:58 -0700
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Subject: Re: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Review of draft report

Here's my two cents so far.

Added comments to Avri's and Alan's, and where appropriate have put in redlined 
changes that IMO address the concerns.

I only got to page 22 so far. But here's what I have.