Re: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Latest draft of the JAS WG Final Report

[Alain Berranger <alain.berranger@xxxxxxxxx>]

Dear Seth,

Thnaks for accounting for most of my comments... Thanks to the editing
team... This is a tough job indeed, and we still have a couple of final
versions to come to catch everything.

Best, Alain

On Wed, Aug 24, 2011 at 5:44 PM, Seth Greene <Seth.Greene@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

>  Hello, JAS WG members,
>
>  Attached please find the most recent draft of the JAS WG Final Report,
> both as a redline and a clean copy.  This is the "20110824 (RHv2SGv1)"
> draft.
>
> At this point, kindly base any comments regarding the text on this draft.
> (Thanks very much for being careful with the draft numbers.)
>
> *PROGRESS IN THE ATTACHED DRAFT *
>
> In this draft, you will see:
>
>    1)  Incorporation of the recent e-mailed comments/edits from Alain B.,
> Andrew M. and Tijani B.  Many thanks for these comments.
>
>    2)  Incorporation of the Tuesday WG call discussions re:
>
>             -  The SARP composition
>
>             -  Support recovery
>
>             -  Bundling
>
>             -  Staggered fees
>     3)  Addition (or extensive rewriting) of the following sections to the
> Report:
>
>             -  Introduction (p. 4)
>
>                       -  Levels of Agreement within the JAS WG
>
>             -  When Should Support Be Offered? (p. 6)
>
>             -  Appendix 1:  JAS WG Background (p. 39)
>
>                       -  Overview
>
>                       -  JAS WG Objective and Operation
>
>                       -  Key Records and Interim Reports
>
>                       -  Key Milestones
>
>            -  Appendix 2:  Glossary (p. 45)
>
>
>
> The editing of certain sections of the Report (especially new sections
> listed above) is still rough.  We are in the process of working on this.
>
>
>
> *THIS FRIDAY'S JAS WG CALL*
>
>
>
> During the upcoming call on Friday, 26 August, we will be reviewing the
> "Funds and Foundation" section of this draft (pp. 6-15 of the attached
> draft).
>
>
>
> On this same topic, please let us know if there are any specific issues or
> questions you would like staff to research prior to the call.
>
>
>
> Again, we appreciate the comments those of you provided on the last draft.
>
>
>
> Many thanks,
>
> Seth
>
>
>
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>
>
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