[soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Latest draft of the JAS WG Final Report
Hello, JAS WG members, Attached please find the most recent draft of the JAS WG Final Report, both as a redline and a clean copy. This is the "20110830 (RHv1SGv2)" draft. At this point, kindly base any comments regarding the text on this draft. (And thanks very much for being careful with the draft numbers.) PROGRESS IN THE ATTACHED DRAFT In this draft, you will see: 1) Incorporation of the most recent comments submitted by Alan G., Avri and Carlton. Many thanks for these comments; 2) Incorporation of the comments agreed upon during the Tuesday, 30 August, WG call; and 3) Addition of the first draft of an Executive Summary (p. 4). The editing of certain sections of this draft is still rough. We are in the process of editing all sections. THIS FRIDAY'S JAS WG CALL During the upcoming call on Friday, 2 September, we will be reviewing: 1) The new "Executive Summary" (p. 4 of the attached draft); and 2) The comments still pending from WG members and staff (flagged throughout clean draft). Again, we appreciate the WG's comments on the last draft. Many thanks, Seth ______ Seth Greene Interim Manager, At-Large Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: + 1 (212) 662-7723 E-mail: seth.greene@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:seth.greene@xxxxxxxxx> Attachment:
Draft_Final_Report_JASWG_20110830 (RHv1SGv2)(redline)[1].doc Attachment:
Draft_Final_Report_JASWG_20110830 (RHv1SGv2)(clean)[1].doc
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