Re: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Latest draft of the JAS WG Final Report

[Carlton Samuels <carlton.samuels@xxxxxxxxx>]

I'm on the move tomorrow and likely will not land MIA until 9a EDT. So all
things considered, will not make tomorrow's call.  If I get thru the lines
quickly, I might join the post call drafting team.

Carlton
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On Wed, Aug 31, 2011 at 10:12 PM, Seth Greene <Seth.Greene@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

>  Hello, JAS WG members,
>
>  Attached please find the most recent draft of the JAS WG Final Report,
> both as a redline and a clean copy.  This is the "20110830 (RHv1SGv2)"
> draft.
>
> At this point, kindly base any comments regarding the text on this draft.
> (And thanks very much for being careful with the draft numbers.)
>
> *PROGRESS IN THE ATTACHED DRAFT *
>
> In this draft, you will see:
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>    1)  Incorporation of the most recent comments submitted by Alan G.,
> Avri and Carlton.  Many thanks for these comments;
>
>    2)  Incorporation of the comments agreed upon during the Tuesday, 30
> August, WG call; and
>
>    3)
> Addition of the first draft of an Executive Summary (p. 4).
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>
>
> The editing of certain sections of this draft is still rough.  We are in
> the process of editing all sections.
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>
>
> *THIS FRIDAY'S JAS WG CALL*
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>
>
> During the upcoming call on Friday, 2 September, we will be reviewing:
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>    1)  The new "Executive Summary" (p. 4 of the attached draft); and
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>    2)  The comments still pending from WG members and staff (flagged
> throughout clean draft).
>
>
>
> Again, we appreciate the WG's comments on the last draft.
>
>
>
> Many thanks,
>
> Seth
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