RE: [gnso-consumercci-dt] Latest Version of Advice Letter & Supplement

["Berry Cobb" <mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Team,

 

I incorporated Steve's suggested changes into the master document and I also
made the modifications per Evan's request.

 

As for the link to the attendance spreadsheet, I removed the HTTPS.  This
should allow all users access to it.

 

Thank you.  B

 

Berry Cobb

Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)

720.839.5735

 <mailto:mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx

@berrycobb

 

 

From: owner-gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx
[mailto:owner-gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Steve DelBianco
Sent: Thursday, August 16, 2012 11:36
To: Berry Cobb; gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [gnso-consumercci-dt] Latest Version of Advice Letter &
Supplement

 

Thanks, Berry.  

 

In the attached markup of the Advice Letter:

On page 4 we should note Evan's reply comment.  I did it this way:

 The dissenting position of two WG members are included in Appendix C, along
with a response to that dissent from another WG member.

 

On page 8 I fixed one grammar error "Scope . is " 

 

I repeated the table heading row on several pages

 

The link to WG attendance Log requires the reader to have Confluence login
credentials.   Could you save the spreadsheet as a PDF and place it
somewhere that does not require the reader to login?

 

In the attached Next Steps note to GNSO:

I revised footnote 1 on the timeline to read:

ICANN Board instructs ICANN to start collecting available baseline metrics
of existing gTLDs and new gTLDs once delegated, until final metrics
framework requirement is completed by the Review Team

1.        

2.       I revised footnote 6 to read:

3.       3 Year delegation mark for target comparison, as requested in the
Dec-2010 ICANN Board resolution.

 

From: Berry Cobb <mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Tuesday, August 14, 2012 8:06 PM
To: "gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx" <gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx>
Subject: [gnso-consumercci-dt] Latest Version of Advice Letter & Supplement

 

Team,

 

Here are the latest drafts of the Advice Letter and supplement Action Plan
for the GNSO Council.  As mentioned on the call, please submit any changes
to the list by Friday 17 August 2012, 17:00 UTC.

 

The following is a list of changes requested by the WG:

4.       Update dissent position anchor and Appendix C

5.       Update to note #5 of definition of Competition

6.       Added link to attendance log

7.       Confirmed function of hyper-links

8.       Search for use of "the" before SO/AC

9.       Search for proper use of ICANN Board

10.   Highlights of Grey Sections of Metrics tables (bold)'

11.   Page break of Grey Sections of Metrics

12.   Added Full-Stop to Metrics Descriptions

13.   Add end-notes to Competition Metrics Descriptions

 

Thank you.  B

 

Berry Cobb

Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)

720.839.5735

mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx

@berrycobb