Re: [gnso-consumercci-dt] Latest Version of Advice Letter & Supplement
Thanks, Berry. In the attached markup of the Advice Letter: On page 4 we should note Evan's reply comment. I did it this way: The dissenting position of two WG members are included in Appendix C, along with a response to that dissent from another WG member. On page 8 I fixed one grammar error "Scope … is " I repeated the table heading row on several pages The link to WG attendance Log requires the reader to have Confluence login credentials. Could you save the spreadsheet as a PDF and place it somewhere that does not require the reader to login? In the attached Next Steps note to GNSO: I revised footnote 1 on the timeline to read: ICANN Board instructs ICANN to start collecting available baseline metrics of existing gTLDs and new gTLDs once delegated, until final metrics framework requirement is completed by the Review Team I revised footnote 6 to read: 3 Year delegation mark for target comparison, as requested in the Dec-2010 ICANN Board resolution. From: Berry Cobb <mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx<mailto:mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>> Date: Tuesday, August 14, 2012 8:06 PM To: "gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx>" <gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx>> Subject: [gnso-consumercci-dt] Latest Version of Advice Letter & Supplement Team, Here are the latest drafts of the Advice Letter and supplement Action Plan for the GNSO Council. As mentioned on the call, please submit any changes to the list by Friday 17 August 2012, 17:00 UTC. The following is a list of changes requested by the WG: 1. Update dissent position anchor and Appendix C 2. Update to note #5 of definition of Competition 3. Added link to attendance log 4. Confirmed function of hyper-links 5. Search for use of “the” before SO/AC 6. Search for proper use of ICANN Board 7. Highlights of Grey Sections of Metrics tables (bold)’ 8. Page break of Grey Sections of Metrics 9. Added Full-Stop to Metrics Descriptions 10. Add end-notes to Competition Metrics Descriptions Thank you. B Berry Cobb Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) 720.839.5735 mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx<mailto:mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> @berrycobb Attachment:
Consumer_Metrics_Advice_FINAL_DRAFT_v1.9.2 [Steve].docx Attachment:
Consumer_Metrics_GNSOCouncil_NextSteps_v0.5 [Steve].docx
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