Re: [gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg] Plans for the next few weeks
Dear Chris, Many thanks for your reply. It is consistent with what I had thought. As suggested, I attach herewith a modified review tool v7. My comments relate to lines 6, 14, 40, 50, and 72, and a spelling error correction in line 67. I felt the existing comments under WG Response for these lines needed further clarity and I have inserted some text in CAPS (also change tracked) in the attached copy for your/WG's consideration. Whilst having missed the benefit of discussions on lines 22, 74, and 75 from today's call, in principle I am in agreement with the stated WG Response for line 22. I disagree with the call for mandatory transformation in line 74 and view IPC's comment in line 75 as a possible way forward but in respect of totally voluntary transformation by registrar or registrants. I am of course guided by the technical viability of such proposal. That's it for now. Regards, Justine Chew ----- On 9 April 2015 at 07:25, Dillon, Chris <c.dillon@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Dear Justine, > > > > The final version of the comment review tool will form an appendix of the > final report and influence various sections of it. In early drafts you will > be see which comments caused which changes. > > > > Please raise your issues now on the list. They may duplicate some of the > content of today’s call, especially if they refer to lines 22, 74 and 75, > but this will save time. > > > > Regards, > > > > Chris. > > -- > > Research Associate in Linguistic Computing, Centre for Digital Humanities, > UCL, Gower St, London WC1E 6BT Tel +44 20 7679 1599 (int 31599) > www.ucl.ac.uk/dis/people/chrisdillon > > > > *From:* Justine Chew [mailto:justine.chew@xxxxxxxxx] > *Sent:* 09 April 2015 15:17 > > *To:* Dillon, Chris > *Cc:* gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx > *Subject:* Re: [gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg] Plans for the next few weeks > > > > Dear Chris, > > My apologies for having missed the call, I only managed to log in at the > tail end of the hour. > > I heard you say that you would be circulating an updated copy of the > public comment review tool document - I wanted to ask if this document was > intended to be appended to the Final Report, and if yes, would it be so in > the form it is currently presented? I had some comments about some of the > "WG Response" entries. Perhaps I should raise them in the updated copy > which will be circulated after this? > > > Thanks, > > Justine Chew > ----- > > > > On 9 April 2015 at 00:24, Dillon, Chris <c.dillon@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Dear Petter, > > > > Thank you for your email. We are intending to run today: > > > > Draft agenda > 1. Welcome > 2. Roll call > 3. Statements of interest > 4. Public comment review tool v7 > <https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/52894856/Public%20comment%20review%20tool%20TT%20Initial%20Report%20V7%20CD.doc?version=1&modificationDate=1427669802000&api=v2> > 5. Review of proposed work plan > <https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/52894856/T%26T_Amended_DraftWorkPlan_2.doc?version=1&modificationDate=1427670057000&api=v2> > 6. AOB > > > > Moreover, it is hoped that we will be able to circulate a first draft of > the final report (probably missing some sections) for discussion on the 16 > th. > > > > Regards, > > > > Chris. > > -- > > Research Associate in Linguistic Computing, Centre for Digital Humanities, > UCL, Gower St, London WC1E 6BT Tel +44 20 7679 1599 (int 31599) > www.ucl.ac.uk/dis/people/chrisdillon > > > > *From:* Petter Rindforth [mailto:petter.rindforth@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] > *Sent:* 09 April 2015 08:04 > *To:* Dillon, Chris > *Cc:* gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx > *Subject:* Re: [gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg] Plans for the next few weeks > > > > Hi Chris, > > > > Just to be sure: do we have a meeting today, or is our next meeting on > April 14?? > > > > Best, > > Petter > > -- > Petter Rindforth, LL M > > Fenix Legal KB > Stureplan 4c, 4tr > 114 35 Stockholm > Sweden > Fax: +46(0)8-4631010 > Direct phone: +46(0)702-369360 > E-mail: petter.rindforth@xxxxxxxxxxxxx > www.fenixlegal.eu > > > NOTICE > This e-mail message is intended solely for the individual or individuals > to whom it is addressed. It may contain confidential attorney-client > privileged information and attorney work product. If the reader of this > message is not the intended recipient, you are requested not to read, copy > or distribute it or any of the information it contains. Please delete it > immediately and notify us by return e-mail. > Fenix Legal KB, Sweden, www.fenixlegal.eu > Thank you > > 2 april 2015, Dillon, Chris <c.dillon@xxxxxxxxx> skrev: > > Dear colleagues, > > > > We weren't able to run today's meeting as there were only three > participants. > > > > I would like to suggest that we just postpone everything by one week. That > would mean we would circulate a draft final report on 14 April. > > > > Before our next meeting, please make sure you are happy with the workplan > and check whether you have final amendments for > > the comment review tool (see the URL below for both). So far no > submissions have been made. If there aren't any by the end of next week's > meeting we will assume that everyone is OK with the comments. > > https://community.icann.org/display/tatcipdp/2+April+2015 > > > > For those of you on holiday, enjoy it! > > > > Regards, > > > > Chris. > > == > > Research Associate in Linguistic Computing, Centre for Digital Humanities, > UCL, Gower St, London WC1E 6BT Tel +44 20 7679 1599 (int 31599) > ucl.ac.uk/dis/people/chrisdillon > > > > > Attachment:
Public comment review tool TT Initial Report V7 CD.doc
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