RE: [gnso-igo-ingo] Latest Work Products for IGO-INGO Consensus Call
Hi Thomas, and colleagues, Comprehensive indeed. We can agree with most of your suggestions. We have a only a few comments, and attach them here. Hi Berry, Please let us know if you would like us to update the ISO-IEC Minority Statement we sent in August to reflect new dates and titles. Thank you again, Claudia (ISO) From: owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Gomes, Chuck Sent: 2013-09-13 01:53 To: Berry Cobb; gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx Subject: RE: [gnso-igo-ingo] Latest Work Products for IGO-INGO Consensus Call Importance: High I did what I think was a fairly comprehensive review of the main body of the draft final report and made quite a few edits (mostly minor I think) and inserted some comments and questions. It was a cumbersome and tedious job so I would appreciate it if a few people would check the edits I proposed and validate them or correct them. One big change I suggested was to reorder the sections by putting the recommendations earlier in the main body of the report so that readers see them sooner and to not have to first wade through lengthy Background and Deliberation sections first. I did not make that change in the document because it would have probably created confusion with the redlining. My rationale for suggesting the reordering is stated in comments at the beginning of Sections 3, 4 & 5. Chuck From: owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx> [mailto:owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Berry Cobb Sent: Wednesday, September 11, 2013 5:06 PM To: gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx> Subject: [gnso-igo-ingo] Latest Work Products for IGO-INGO Consensus Call Importance: High WG Members, Please find attached the latest versions of the documents for the Consensus Call as we prepare to release the draft Final Report for Public Comment next week. A few notes about the attached documents: 1. IGO-INGO_Consensus_Recommendations_v1.3 - contains the compilation of responses from groups and individual for the first round of the consensus call. As of today, this does not include the RrSG and the CBUC support statements, but we anticipate them to be sent shortly. As I get each official statement, I will send out a revised version of this document. 2. IGO-INGO_Final_Report_v0.1 - This version of the report contains all the tracked-changes as it migrated from Initial to draft Final. There are far too many changes for this to be a useful tool, and thus all changes were accepted in v0.2, but I included it for your reference. 3. IGO-INGO_Final_Report_v0.3 - This version includes all changes that were accepted in v0.2 and it includes tracked changes that were made as a result of today's call. This version has the latest consensus levels, but note that it does not include Minority View statements. Please provide any feedback or suggested changes within the v0.3 version of the report (track changes are enabled). Also as a reminder, for those groups that anticipate including a Minority View position statement, please send those along to the list and I will incorporate them into the master version of Section 5. DUE DATE: All suggest edits, changes, and Minority View statements must be submitted to the list by 17 September 2013 @ 22:00 UTC (note, I extended this by 6 hours to give groups a bit more time.) As stated on the call, we will review the final version of the report in next week's call, and with the WG's permission submit the report for Public Comment on 19 September 2013. We will discuss in detail this round of the public comment forum in addition to any discussions we have about the policy recommendations. Thank you for everyone's participation today. Happy reading! :) B Berry Cobb Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) 720.839.5735 mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx<mailto:mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> @berrycobb Attachment:
IGO-INGO_Final_Report_v0 3 with ISO Comments.docx
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