Re: [gnso-policyimpl-dt] For your review - Updated Charter & Doodle poll
<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"><base href="x-msg://134/"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">hi all,<div><br></div><div>here's my version. i started with Chuck's draft, tried to incorporate the intent of this thread, and added a few minor changes of my own. the most visible change is that i moved the "questions" down below the "tasks" section -- they didn't seem to flow well where they were. i also made a few changes to Mission and Scope, mostly to improve readability, but changes in wording of that section are especially important so please review them carefully.</div><div><br></div><div>mikey</div><div><br></div><div></div></body></html> Attachment:
Policy Implementation WG - Charter - Updated - 27 June 2013.doc <html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"><base href="x-msg://134/"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><div></div><div><br></div><div><br><div><div>On Jun 27, 2013, at 6:55 AM, "Gomes, Chuck" <<a href="mailto:cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx";>cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple" style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: medium; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: -webkit-auto; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; "><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1; "><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 17px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">That would make sense Marika. My original intent in proposing the item was to create a deliverable related to the questions asked in 4.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 17px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 17px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 17px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div><div style="border-style: solid none none; border-top-width: 1pt; border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, 223); padding: 3pt 0in 0in; "><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><b><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif; ">From:</span></b><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif; "><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Marika Konings [mailto:marika.konings@<a href="http://icann.org"; style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">icann.org</a>]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br><b>Sent:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Thursday, June 27, 2013 4:21 AM<br><b>To:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Gomes, Chuck;<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx"; style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx</a><br><b>Subject:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Re: For your review - Updated Charter & Doodle poll<o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="">Thanks, Chuck. In relation to your first comment, maybe replacing 'questions' with 'tasks' would solve this issue so that the sentence would read 'To develop, at a minimum, an Initial Recommendations Report and a Final Recommendations Report addressing the charter<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><s>questions</s> tasks outlined above'?<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; "> </span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; ">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; "> </span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; ">Marika<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; "> </span></div></div><div style="border-style: solid none none; border-top-width: 1pt; border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, 223); padding: 3pt 0in 0in; "><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><b><span style="">From:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></b><span style=""><Gomes>, Chuck Gomes <<a href="mailto:cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx"; style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx</a>><br><b>Date:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Thursday 27 June 2013 03:02<br><b>To:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Marika Konings <<a href="mailto:marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx"; style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx</a>>, "<a href="mailto:gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx"; style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx"; style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx</a>><br><b>Subject:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>RE: For your review - Updated Charter & Doodle poll</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; "><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; "> </span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 17px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">I inserted two comments that I think are non-material. My compliments on the great progress that has been made.</span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 17px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 17px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Chuck</span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 17px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div><div><div style="border-style: solid none none; border-top-width: 1pt; border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, 223); padding: 3pt 0in 0in; "><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><b><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 14px; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif; ">From:</span></b><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 14px; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif; "><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx"; style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>[<a href="mailto:owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx"; style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">mailto:owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx</a>]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><b>On Behalf Of<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Marika Konings<br><b>Sent:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Tuesday, June 25, 2013 3:57 AM<br><b>To:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx"; style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx</a><br><b>Subject:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>[gnso-policyimpl-dt] For your review - Updated Charter & Doodle poll</span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style=""> <o:p></o:p></span></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; line-height: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Dear All,</span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; line-height: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "> </span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; line-height: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Following our call yesterday, please find attached an updated version of the proposed charter incorporating the changes and edits discussed. You are encouraged to share any edits / comments you may have with the mailing list in view of finalising the charter at our next meeting on Monday 1 July at 19.00 UTC.</span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; line-height: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "> </span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; line-height: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">In case more time is needed for discussion, we want to plan a second call next week as a back-up. Please complete the following doodle poll so we can determine the best time / date to schedule this potential second call: <a name="participationLink" id="participationLink"></a><a href="http://www.doodle.com/evbxtvwz779y8ku5"; style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">http://www.doodle.com/evbxtvwz779y8ku5</a>.</span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; line-height: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "> </span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; line-height: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Thanks,</span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; line-height: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "> </span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: 18px; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; line-height: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Marika</span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div></div></div></blockquote></div><br><div apple-content-edited="true"> <br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: -webkit-auto; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; display: inline !important; float: none; ">PHONE: 651-647-6109, FAX: 866-280-2356, WEB: <a href="http://www.haven2.com";>www.haven2.com</a>, HANDLE: OConnorStP (ID for Twitter, Facebook, LinkedIn, etc.)</span> </div> <br></div></body></html> Attachment:
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