[gnso-thickwhoispdp-wg] RE: For your review - Thick Whois Draft Final Report
Thank Marika for circulating this draft in a timely fashion. It looks very good to me. The attached makes two minor corrections on pages 35 (fn. 20) and 43, and suggests revisions to paragraph 3 on pages 47-48, which at a minimum needs updating because the RAA and RA have become final. I am suggesting that this is a good place to also make reference to the EWG and the Board-initiated PDP that will follow on it as relevant for a for the privacy/Whois examination. Finally, the reference to the Singapore commission in paragraph 1 on page 47 needs to be updated by someone knowledgeable about whether the commission did in fact begin its work last May. Steve Metalitz From: owner-gnso-thickwhoispdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-thickwhoispdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Marika Konings Sent: Tuesday, September 10, 2013 8:57 AM To: gnso-thickwhoispdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx Subject: [gnso-thickwhoispdp-wg] For your review - Thick Whois Draft Final Report Dear All, Please find attached for your review a first draft of the Thick Whois Final Report. This version incorporates all the changes agreed to during the review of the public comments received, as well as some other updates to mark the change from the Initial to Final Report (note, the executive summary will be updated following finalisation of the other parts of the report). If I've missed anything, or if you have any other suggestions / proposed edits, please feel free to share those with the mailing list ahead of the next meeting (Tuesday 17 September at 14.00 UTC). I'll also be updating the public comment review tool based on our discussions last week and share that for your review shortly. Best regards, Marika Attachment:
thick Whois -Final Report - draft - 10 September 2013.doc
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