RE: [gnso-vi-feb10] Revised SRSU draft text
Like I said in my original message earlier this morning/late last night, the text I put forward does not include any statement of level of support, which I believe must be included. I'm hopeful that we can get that worked out today because it's essential, in my view, that the level of support be identified. In fact, I think the discussion of each proposal should include a level of support statement. Here are my comments on your redline. ________________________________ From: Neuman, Jeff [mailto:Jeff.Neuman@xxxxxxxxxx] Sent: Friday, July 16, 2010 9:04 AM To: Rosette, Kristina; mike@xxxxxxxxxx Cc: gnso-vi-feb10@xxxxxxxxx Subject: RE: [gnso-vi-feb10] Revised SRSU draft text Thanks Kristina. Whether something is in a footnote or appendix, I am not so concerned about that. Either one is fine. Yes the IPC distributed its proposal 2 months ago. The RySG submitted its proposal in April 2009. I don't think that is the issue. The IPC proposal should stay in tact as is with no changes. Not recommending any changes to that at all. I just want to the Initial Report to reflect the sense of the full group and I believe a number of people on the call yesterday expressed (even supporters of SRSU like myself) that while in concept the SRSU is something we can support, the exact details must be worked on. Its actually interesting you point to the IRT Report, because in that case, when the IRT changed elements that were in the initial report to reflect more comprehensive discussions for the final report, some in the IP community were up in arms that we could make such drastic changes (like the elimination of the GPML). I am trying to avoid that here, where we just put things in the body of the initial report making it appear as if there is wide support within the VI WG, and then having to retract it later on. If in this case we change the implementation details from what is in the IPC proposal, I am sure some will be up in arms about that as well because we did put it in the initial report. I hope that makes sense and again want to state that I do support the concept of the SRSU. Jeffrey J. Neuman Neustar, Inc. / Vice President, Law & Policy ________________________________ The information contained in this e-mail message is intended only for the use of the recipient(s) named above and may contain confidential and/or privileged information. If you are not the intended recipient you have received this e-mail message in error and any review, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this message is strictly prohibited. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately and delete the original message. From: Rosette, Kristina [mailto:krosette@xxxxxxx] Sent: Friday, July 16, 2010 8:56 AM To: Neuman, Jeff; mike@xxxxxxxxxx Cc: gnso-vi-feb10@xxxxxxxxx Subject: RE: [gnso-vi-feb10] Revised SRSU draft text 1. Very little of this text is actually new. Most of it was distributed to the WG 2 months ago or earlier this week. 2. There's no endorsement intended. It's indisputable that the IPC has put forward the most detailed SRSU exception proposal, and the so-called "implementation details" are essential elements of the .brand exception it has proposed. We all know that putting the details in the appendix means that most people outside the VI WG won't read them - although they will certainly comment on it. (Some of the most vocal opponents of the IRT recommendations at the Sydney meeting admitted - either directly or indirectly by displaying complete ignorance of key points - by the Seoul meeting that they hadn't actually read the report.) It's important to avoid that situation again as it undermines the confidence in the process by those who don't spend as much time in ICANNland as we all do. It also undermines all of the work that all of us have done on the WG. I intentionally relegated them to a footnote so that they were easily accessible, but not given the prominence of "regular text" inclusion. If the "implementation details" are deleted from this proposal, then they should be deleted from all of the other proposals too. In that case, look for my redline. 3. I have no objection to someone who opposes an SRSU exception providing generally representative text (e.g, Critics of the SRSU exception . . . .). Just don't expect me to write it. I'm too far behind from being out of the office for 4 days. 4. Everyone on the WG who has put forward some iteration of SRSU has had at least a week to send me text that they wanted included. I haven't received a word. I also still haven't read the Initial Report (let's not forget that it was circulated only a few days ago - when I was in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean without Internet access). If there's text re: SRSU in other proposals that can be copied over or incorporated, I have no problem with that. ________________________________ From: Neuman, Jeff [mailto:Jeff.Neuman@xxxxxxxxxx] Sent: Friday, July 16, 2010 7:47 AM To: 'mike@xxxxxxxxxx'; Rosette, Kristina Cc: 'gnso-vi-feb10@xxxxxxxxx' Subject: Re: [gnso-vi-feb10] Revised SRSU draft text Mikey - how long do we have to comment on Kristina's text. I believe the text is way too detailed for what this group should put out in an initial report and purports to show endorsement of the IPC implementation of not only SRSU, but also SRMU, which was hardly the case. I will be providing me edits as quickly as I can, but we cannot rush this. I find it amazing that new things were added to the report as a whole in less than 24 hours before submission. As previously stated, let's define SRSU as a concept in the body of the report, but the specific implementation (like eligibility requirements, etc.) needs to be pushed back to an appendix under the IPC proposal. Just because 1 proponent of the SRSU had a requirement that the SRSU could not be from a party whose primary business is that of a registry, registrar, reseller, etc. Does NOT mean this was endorsed in any way by the group. Jeffrey J. Neuman, Esq. Vice President, Law & Policy NeuStar, Inc. Jeff.Neuman@xxxxxxxxxxx ________________________________ From: owner-gnso-vi-feb10@xxxxxxxxx <owner-gnso-vi-feb10@xxxxxxxxx> To: Rosette, Kristina <krosette@xxxxxxx> Cc: gnso-vi-feb10@xxxxxxxxx <gnso-vi-feb10@xxxxxxxxx> Sent: Fri Jul 16 01:38:33 2010 Subject: Re: [gnso-vi-feb10] Revised SRSU draft text Woohoo! way to go Kristina. your timing is perfect. i was just looking wistfully at that section of the report and hoping to find a new draft when i opened email. thanks! mikey On Jul 16, 2010, at 12:08 AM, Rosette, Kristina wrote: All, Here's revised SRSU draft text. In the interests of time, I am sending this to the list even though Milton and Avri have not had a chance to review it. It's subject to any changes they may have. I've also included, for completeness, reference to the SRMU exception that the IPC proposed. One section I have not included is the level of support. Milton and I both believe that there may be consensus support for the SRSU exception among the non-contracted party house members of the WG. If we could determine that on the list (as opposed to on the call), I can add the relevant text. K <<07162010 SR Initial Report text.DOC>> <07162010 SR Initial Report text.DOC> - - - - - - - - - phone 651-647-6109 fax 866-280-2356 web http://www.haven2.com handle OConnorStP (ID for public places like Twitter, Facebook, Google, etc.) Attachment:
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