Re: [gnso-vi-feb10] New version of the report-draft candidate -- now Version 5

[Avri Doria <avri@xxxxxxx>]

Hi,

I admire the amount of work you are putting in to this.

I cannot, however, open the document listed belw.

In reading V 4, I have do have one recommendation:

Section 5

> reflecting the good faith negotiations and reasoned debate that has ensued 
> among the members of the VI Working Group

I think this phrase can be dropped without damaging the report.  

I think that while many people engaged in good faith and reasoned negotiations, 
it can not be said that all have done so.  

I am not suggesting that we put a counter statement of the level of good faith. 
 That is the sort of thing my minority statement would cover in respect to the 
suppression of material, especially the report of the S&W session.

However, in honoring the Herculean effort of the chairs, I will trade my 
minority report for removal of this sentence.

a.




On 21 Jul 2010, at 09:09, Mike O'Connor wrote:

> 
> all hail Margie and Marika!
> 
> Marika updated the report and fixed a whole bunch of formatting problems in 
> the draft i published last night.  the latest version is Version 5, out on 
> the wiki at;
> 
>       
> https://st.icann.org/vert-integration-pdp/index.cgi?initial_report_snapshots
> 
> this version is strictly a formatting revision, no content changes.  but it's 
> the one you should use because line-numbers have changed a bit from my draft.
> 
> thanks!
> 
> mikey
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