Re: [gnso-vi-feb10] New version of the report-draft candidate -- now Version 5

["Mike O'Connor" <mike@xxxxxxxxxx>]

On Jul 21, 2010, at 8:21 AM, Avri Doria wrote:

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> Hi,
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> I admire the amount of work you are putting in to this.
> 
> I cannot, however, open the document listed belw.

hm.  i've put the original file i got from Marika up on the wiki right below 
mine.  all i did was bump the version number and re-save it.  but if you would 
be so kind as to try opening the "V4 - formatted MK" version that's up there, 
it'll help me figure out where things went wrong.  thanks for catching that so 
quickly.


> 
> In reading V 4, I have do have one recommendation:
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> Section 5
> 
>> reflecting the good faith negotiations and reasoned debate that has ensued 
>> among the members of the VI Working Group
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> I think this phrase can be dropped without damaging the report.  
> 
> I think that while many people engaged in good faith and reasoned 
> negotiations, it can not be said that all have done so.  
> 
> I am not suggesting that we put a counter statement of the level of good 
> faith.  That is the sort of thing my minority statement would cover in 
> respect to the suppression of material, especially the report of the S&W 
> session.
> 
> However, in honoring the Herculean effort of the chairs, I will trade my 
> minority report for removal of this sentence.

as a part of the Herculean effort i accept that offer.  a darn fine trade.  

thanks,

mikey


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> On 21 Jul 2010, at 09:09, Mike O'Connor wrote:
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>> 
>> all hail Margie and Marika!
>> 
>> Marika updated the report and fixed a whole bunch of formatting problems in 
>> the draft i published last night.  the latest version is Version 5, out on 
>> the wiki at;
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>> https://st.icann.org/vert-integration-pdp/index.cgi?initial_report_snapshots
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>> this version is strictly a formatting revision, no content changes.  but 
>> it's the one you should use because line-numbers have changed a bit from my 
>> draft.
>> 
>> thanks!
>> 
>> mikey
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