Re: [soac-mapo] Revised draft Charter Terms of Reference for your review

[Jon Nevett <jon@xxxxxxxxxx>]

I support Stephane's suggestion.  Thanks.  Jon

On Aug 24, 2010, at 7:00 AM, Stéphane Van Gelder wrote:

> Thanks Liz,
> 
> I would like to suggest the word "preliminary" be stricken from the very last 
> sentence of this document (shown in red below):
> 
> "The Rec6 CWG should deliver a preliminary report with comments from the 
> GNSO, ALAC, and GAC not later than 13 September 2010 to meet the 11-day 
> advance publication that the Board requests for its retreat on new gTLDs."
> 
> While I understand from Frank's comments sent to the list yesterday that 
> replacing it with the word "final" would be worrisome for the GAC, I do think 
> the group's focus should be on meeting the deadline de-facto imposed on it by 
> the Board retreat.
> 
> Leaving "preliminary" in there implies that there would be more to come from 
> the group. That may be, but it may also be that after whatever the Board 
> decides to do during its September retreat, this group will become moot.
> 
> I therefore suggest we do not be any more specific in the ToR than saying 
> "deliver a report".
> 
> Stéphane
> 
> Le 24 août 2010 à 00:31, Liz Gasster a écrit :
> 
>> All,
>>  
>> Attached please find a clean copy of the draft charter Terms of Reference 
>> for your review and input.  By the end of today’s call, participants had 
>> reviewed all of the in-line edits previously suggested, resulting in this 
>> clean draft. The drafting team did not complete review of more general 
>> comments made previously, so these continue to be appended following the 
>> appendices.  This content will be deleted before the Charter is finalized.  
>> For those of you who still have your comments appended to this draft, please 
>> let me know if you think your previous comments have been resolved with 
>> these edits.
>>  
>> Please review this draft and offer any further revisions you think should be 
>> made.  The group will meet again next Monday 30 August at the same time.   
>>  
>> Thanks, Liz
>> <Rec6 TOR updated as of 23 Aug 2300 UTC.doc>
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