Re: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] writing exercise.

[Eric Brunner-Williams <ebw@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

> > @153-166 please see the if-then text I sent earlier today, which recites the 
> > proposal I've offered previously.
> ok.
>
> i have rewritten the section as having two options A, B
>
> I have also rewritten yours a little to make it match the curent workding in 
> the document, I hope I did not take too many liberties.

It is fine. There's a typo in the 2nd word ("and" should be "an").

I can see you're busy in Vilnus on the RPKI track. Thanks for reading 
the suggested edits.
Eric