[soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Latest draft of JAS WG Final Report
Hello, JAS WG members, Many thanks to the WG members who have offered input on the JAS WG Final Report up to this point -- and to those who have helped make this a successful WG/staff collaboration. LAST ROUND OF COMMENTS Attached please find the most recent draft of the Report, both as a redline and a clean copy. This is the "20110909 (RHv1SGv2LLv1)" draft. Kindly base any further comments regarding the text on this draft. This is the last opportunity for WG members to submit input on the Report. At this point, we request that you kindly limit your input to two types of comments: - Corrections of typos or glaring errors in substance, wording or grammar (and it's our expectation, of course, that no such errors remain in the document at this point); and - Minority statements that you would like published (with little or no suggested editing) as an Apprendix to the Report. Please return these comments to us by Monday, 12 September, at 20:00 UTC. We expect to submit the Report on that day or the next. PROGRESS IN THE ATTACHED DRAFT In this draft, you will see: - Incorporation of the WG's discussion on Fri, 9 Sep; and - Incorporation of a complete edit and proofread for grammar, readability, etc. (without changing the substance). Many thanks, Seth ______ Seth Greene Interim Manager, At-Large Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: + 1 (212) 662-7723 E-mail: seth.greene@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:seth.greene@xxxxxxxxx> Attachment:
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