Re: [gnso-vi-feb10] DRAFT version of "atoms" survey

[Antony Van Couvering <avc@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Don't forget, "This is not applicable."

On Jun 15, 2010, at 1:11 PM, Mike O'Connor wrote:

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> On Jun 14, 2010, at 4:39 PM, Eric Brunner-Williams wrote:
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>> In my opinion this was the first useful tool you've come up with.
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> LOL.  thanks!  i think...  :-)
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>> Some questions could be phrased differently, a paragraph of difficult
>> to write (so that will never happen) issue explanation copy would
>> help, and due to the relative unfamiliarity of the form there will be
>> errors. It is worth pointing out that the answers are optional, and
>> the respondent is free to go forwards and backwards ... until clicking
>> "submit", and there is no instant gratification showing that 9 out of
>> 10 dentists use Crest(tm) after clicking on "submit".
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> i've added a little blurb on the first page, and figured out how to turn on 
> "sharing" so that everybody can download the results.  it's still pretty 
> massively clunky, but at least it's there.
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>> 
>> The "I'm willing to compromise" is awkward. Is "compromise" around the
>> 15% position 20% or 200%? Is "willing to discuss" on the same question
>> 16% or 15% or 10% or 20%?
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> hm...  here's another try;
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> - I'm willing to discuss a wide range of options
> - I'm willing to discuss, but only within a narrow range of options
> - I'm not willing to discuss, this is a critical position for me
> 
> better?
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>> 
>> The final question is misleading, is this reviewing the work product
>> of this working group, as processed by the Council, then by the Board,
>> and then again by the Staff, plus a couple of loops through the public
>> comments process, or the "rules change for some operators at some
>> offset from time zero" question?
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> yep, i get that.  how about this -- "Should the Vertical Integration 
> framework (as ultimately established by the Board, and embodied in the 
> Applicant Guidebook) be reviewed again later?"
> 
> thanks Eric.  i'm still editing, so things may change some more.
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> mikey
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>> Eric
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