Re: [gnso-igo-ingo] Draft Initial Report for IGO/INGO PDP WG

[Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>]

Attached please find my commented version of the draft report. 
Although many of these comments are in line with previous ALAC 
statements, these comments are being submitted solely on my own behalf.
Alan

At 22/05/2013 02:01 PM, Brian Peck wrote:
> To the Working Group Members,
>
> Please find attached the draft version of the IGO-INGO Initial 
> Report for your review.
> In line with the discussions led by Thomas on our last call, the 
> primary objective of this Report is to highlight to the community 
> the policy recommendation options which the WG has considered in 
> order to solicit direct feedback and/or indications of support for 
> specific options.  After receiving community input the plan would be 
> to hold a consensus call for the proposed policy recommendations on 
> special protections.
> As a result, the focus of the Report is Section 4, with less 
> emphasis on history, background, process/next steps. The Report 
> notes to the community that the proposed recommendation options do 
> not represent a consensus position and thus, we attempted to not 
> include stakeholder positions on any of the possible recommendations 
> or any consensus level indications as observed by the Chair or 
> WG.  We have suggested some specific questions to the community to 
> solicit feedback which are included in the Objectives Section.
> We would greatly appreciate your review and submission of 
> comments/edits you may have in a timely manner so that we can 
> publish the Report for public comment by 30 May, which will give us 
> enough time with the Reply Period to meet the submission deadline 
> for Durban.  In making edits/comments to this Report, we would ask 
> that any positions or comments on the proposed recommendations be 
> made through the public comment period rather than through this Report.
>  Input Deadline:  29 May 12:00 UTC
>  Next Meeting:  29 May 2013, 16:00 UTC
>
>  We will review the report and discuss proposed edits and changes 
> at our next meeting on the 29th.  It is important to have your 
> suggestions submitted by the deadline as to allow merging with the 
> master copy of the report.
> ****NOTE****
>
> When providing feedback, please save a copy of this MS Word document 
> with a change of the file name to indicate who you are or 
> represent.  Track changes are turned on.  Please submit all comments 
> you have about the report within the Word document.  We would like 
> to ensure we collate all feedback in one location.
> Thank you in advance for your continued support and contributions to this WG.
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Brian
>
> Brian Peck
> Policy Director
> ICANN

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