Re: [gnso-policyimpl-dt] For your review - Updated Charter & Doodle poll
<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"><base href="x-msg://134/"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">i like your changes too, Chuck. i found a couple things that i missed the first time around and have added those to the mix.<div><br></div><div>i've also taken a run at the two points that Eric raised -- the second one (page 2, bullet 4 of the "tasked" list) is substantive, so people should pay special attention to that one. here are the two versions:</div><div><br></div><div>original:</div><div><br></div><div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>including criteria for when something is to be considered policy and when it should be considered implementation</div><div><br></div><div>after:</div><div><br></div><div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>Criteria to be used to determine when an action should be addressed by a policy process and when it should be considered implementation<br><div><br></div><div>mikey</div><div><br></div><div></div></div></body></html> Attachment:
Policy Implementation WG - Charter - Updated - 27 June 2013 with Gomes OConnor edits.doc <html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"><base href="x-msg://134/"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><div><div><br><div><div>On Jun 27, 2013, at 1:09 PM, "Gomes, Chuck" <<a href="mailto:cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx";>cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple" style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: medium; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: -webkit-auto; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; "><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1; "><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">I like what you did Mikey. I added a few more edits; to make it easier to find my latest edits, I either highlighted them or an associated comment in yellow.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div><div style="border-style: solid none none; border-top-width: 1pt; border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, 223); padding: 3pt 0in 0in; "><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><b><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif; ">From:</span></b><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif; "><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx"; style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>[mailto:owner-<a href="mailto:gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx"; style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx</a>]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><b>On Behalf Of<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Mike O'Connor<br><b>Sent:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Thursday, June 27, 2013 10:46 AM<br><b>To:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx"; style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx</a><br><b>Subject:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Re: [gnso-policyimpl-dt] For your review - Updated Charter & Doodle poll<o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">hi all,<o:p></o:p></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">here's my version. i started with Chuck's draft, tried to incorporate the intent of this thread, and added a few minor changes of my own. the most visible change is that i moved the "questions" down below the "tasks" section -- they didn't seem to flow well where they were. i also made a few changes to Mission and Scope, mostly to improve readability, but changes in wording of that section are especially important so please review them carefully.<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">mikey<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div></div><span><Policy Implementation WG - Charter - Updated - 27 June 2013 with Gomes edits.doc></span></div></blockquote></div><br><div apple-content-edited="true"> <br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: -webkit-auto; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; display: inline !important; float: none; ">PHONE: 651-647-6109, FAX: 866-280-2356, WEB: <a href="http://www.haven2.com";>www.haven2.com</a>, HANDLE: OConnorStP (ID for Twitter, Facebook, LinkedIn, etc.)</span> </div> <br></div></div></body></html> Attachment:
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