RE: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] My comments on the draft final report
Dear Tijani and all, Attached is a summary document that captures our comments (excluding what Tijani just sent, which I will incorporate after our call tomorrow). This is the same Avri prepared earlier, including our notes. If you see anything missing of misrepresented, please let me know. This document helps us to track where we are in the responses and will serve as the basis for the Summaries and Analyses of Public Comments. Thank you, Karla From: owner-soac-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-soac-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Tijani BEN JEMAA Sent: Tuesday, August 17, 2010 12:54 AM To: soac-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx Subject: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] My comments on the draft final report Dear all, I have read attentively the draft final report with the tables Avri added, and submit you my point of view about it (attached) since we are approaching the final line of submitting our recommendations to the Board. In the attached file, the red colour is applied to words I propose to remove, and the bleu one to the words to add. The explanatory comments are in green. ------------------------------------------------------------------ Tijani BEN JEMAA Executive Director Mediterranean Federation of Internet Associations Phone : + 216 70 825 231 Mobile : + 216 98 330 114 Fax : + 216 70 825 231 ------------------------------------------------------------------ Attachment:
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