Re: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Review of draft report
All,
I've gone through the entire thing (using Evan's recent mark up, where I'm
AM). Where possible have tried to tighten but also point out areas where
either the text was unclear or where I think we need a bit of group
discussion to get to finalize the sense of the WG. For your consideration..
Andrew
On Mon, Aug 22, 2011 at 2:32 PM, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>wrote:
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> Wasn't try to slur OO, but that is the was I (mis)read it. I will now curse
> Word for Mac instead!
>
>
> At 22/08/2011 12:22 PM, Avri Doria wrote:
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> Hi,
>>
>> I don't think so, the small comments were made by Word for MAC (which is
>> what I used that had this misfeature), somehow.
>> It is just that OpenOffice is clever enough to make them visible.
>>
>> (-: Please don't blame OO for having the problem when it was the one with
>> the solution. )
>>
>> I had no problem reading any of Evan's edits in OO.
>>
>> a.
>>
>> On 22 Aug 2011, at 09:57, Robert Hoggarth wrote:
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>> > Thank you Evan. I had completed a new version of the draft encompassing
>> and attempting to address Alan and Avri's comments. I will review your
>> input and make additional changes so that we can have a new master document
>> starting with tomorrow's WG call.
>> >
>> > I am still experiencing difficulty reading comments in the document.
>> Although instances where you have added text is clear, I connect read any
>> comments in the right margin - even Alan's original ones. I am hopeful that
>> I am the only one experiencing this format difficulty, but I am doubtful.
>> Perhaps a format guru on the WG has discovered a format workč‹”round.
>>
>> >
>> > Perhaps you should stop at page 22 and then contribute additional
>> comments and suggested edits after tomorrow's call.
>> >
>> > Best,
>> >
>> > RobH
>> >
>> > From: Evan Leibovitch <evan@xxxxxxxxx>
>> > Date: Mon, 22 Aug 2011 01:46:58 -0700
>> > To: "soac-newgtldapsup-wg@icann.**org <soac-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx>"
>> <SOAC-newgtldapsup-wg@icann.**org <SOAC-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx>>
>> > Subject: Re: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Review of draft report
>> >
>> > Here's my two cents so far.
>> >
>> > Added comments to Avri's and Alan's, and where appropriate have put in
>> redlined changes that IMO address the concerns.
>> >
>> > I only got to page 22 so far. But here's what I have.
>> >
>>
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