RE: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Review of draft report

[Seth Greene <Seth.Greene@xxxxxxxxx>]

Hello, Andrew,

Thanks very much for your comments.  Since we distributed the latest version of 
the draft Report before your comments arrived, we'll incorporate them into the 
next draft.  And, of course, we'll contact you if we have any questions.

Many thanks,
Seth
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From: owner-soac-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx 
[owner-soac-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Andrew Mack 
[amack@xxxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Monday, August 22, 2011 9:22 PM
To: Alan Greenberg
Cc: Avri Doria; Robert Hoggarth; Evan Leibovitch; soac-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Review of draft report

All,

I've gone through the entire thing (using Evan's recent mark up, where I'm AM). 
 Where possible have tried to tighten but also point out areas where either the 
text was unclear or where I think we need a bit of group discussion to get to 
finalize the sense of the WG.  For your consideration..

Andrew



On Mon, Aug 22, 2011 at 2:32 PM, Alan Greenberg 
<alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>> wrote:

Wasn't try to slur OO, but that is the was I (mis)read it. I will now curse 
Word for Mac instead!


At 22/08/2011 12:22 PM, Avri Doria wrote:

Hi,

I don't think so, the small comments were made by Word for MAC (which is what I 
used that had this misfeature), somehow.
It is just that OpenOffice is clever enough to make them visible.

(-: Please don't blame OO for having the problem when it was the one with the 
solution. )

I had no problem reading any of Evan's edits in OO.

a.

On 22 Aug 2011, at 09:57, Robert Hoggarth wrote:

> Thank you Evan.  I had completed a new version of the draft encompassing and 
> attempting to address Alan and Avri's comments.  I will review your input and 
> make additional changes so that we can have a new master document starting 
> with tomorrow's WG call.
>
> I am still experiencing difficulty reading comments in the document. Although 
> instances where you have added text is clear,  I connect read any comments in 
> the right margin - even Alan's original ones. I am hopeful that I am the only 
> one experiencing this format difficulty, but I am doubtful.  Perhaps a format 
> guru on the WG has discovered a format work苔round.

>
> Perhaps you should stop at page 22 and then contribute additional comments 
> and suggested edits after tomorrow's call.
>
> Best,
>
> RobH
>
> From: Evan Leibovitch <evan@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:evan@xxxxxxxxx>>
> Date: Mon, 22 Aug 2011 01:46:58 -0700
> To: "soac-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:soac-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx>" 
> <SOAC-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:SOAC-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx>>
> Subject: Re: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Review of draft report
>
> Here's my two cents so far.
>
> Added comments to Avri's and Alan's, and where appropriate have put in 
> redlined changes that IMO address the concerns.
>
> I only got to page 22 so far. But here's what I have.
>





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