[ssac-gnso-irdwg] Updated interim report
Dear all, here is the updated interim report. I have received comments from Steve Metaliz, Robert Hutchinson, Owen Smigelzki, Jim Galvin, and Jeremy Hitchcock. There are two types of comments: 1) editorial and 2) substantial comments. Most of the comments are editorial, and I have included the editorial comments into the document. There are two sets of substantial comments: one from Jeremy, and one from Robert that I don't think the WG discussed these before. I recommend we discuss these in our next call and then we can make a decision whether and how to include them. Also per action item from the last meeting, I added a section "Deficiencies of the WHOIS protocol", and quoted RFC 3912. Attached are four documents: 1) Draft_IRD-WG_interim_report_10293pm.doc contains the latest interium report. 2) Red-line changes.docx contains all the changes made this report from the October 20's version in redline. 3) IRD_Interim_Report_-_Hutchinson_updates.docx contains the requested language from Robert Hutchinson to the report. 4) Jeremy's edit.docx contains the requested language from Jeremy. Let me know if I miss anything. Steve Sheng Senior Technical Analyst ICANN Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers direct: +1 (310) 823-9358 Cell: +1 (310) 463-8430 fax: +1 (310) 823-8649 www.icann.org Attachment:
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