RE: [gnso-consumercci-dt] 1st draft - Advice Letter Submission Supplement

["Michael R. Graham" <mgraham@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

I like the proposed revision.

MRG


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From: owner-gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx 
[mailto:owner-gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Steve DelBianco
Sent: Tuesday, July 31, 2012 3:06 PM
To: Berry Cobb; gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [gnso-consumercci-dt] 1st draft - Advice Letter Submission 
Supplement

Thanks for this draft, Berry.

I recommend we re-phrase 3rd sentence, from this:
If adopted by the future Affirmation review team, this advice could be critical 
to measuring the success of the new gTLD program

To this:
If adopted by the Board, these metrics could be valuable to the future 
Affirmation review team charged with evaluating the gTLD expansion program.

I also have a question about the timeline chart:  why do we show the 
Affirmation Review Team starting its review at the same time that new 
delegations begin?    I understand that the dashed line implies that we'll 
probably start nominating reviewers several months before the Review begins.    
But the AoC says, "If and when new gTLDs have been in operation for one year," 
so we ought to stick with that.

--
Steve DelBianco


From: Berry Cobb <mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx<mailto:mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>>
Date: Monday, July 30, 2012 11:07 PM
To: "gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx>" 
<gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-consumercci-dt@xxxxxxxxx>>
Subject: [gnso-consumercci-dt] 1st draft - Advice Letter Submission Supplement

Team,

Here is the first draft for advising the Council about Next Steps and a 
possible path forward.  I welcome “messaging” tailoring.  Given the latest 
announcement about the single batch, I adjusted the graphical timeline.  We can 
review this tomorrow after we sprint forward with the Public Comments.

Thank you.  B

Berry Cobb
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